Offer Your Initial Thoughts
Your initial response this week must include the following information, allowing your peers and instructor to provide you with feedback on your ideas.
- A: What is your research topic?
- B: What is your opinion/position on this topic?
- C: What are your three main points of support from Module 6?
- Create a preliminary thesis statement like the one developed in the notes: A + B + C = Thesis statement
Feedback From Last weeks Assignment
That is a very detailed outline! I think you have set yourself up very well with this. I am having a hard time seeing how all of this is argumentative, but I probably just do not know enough about this topic. It seems to be more informative though. What would be a counter argument?
I would put the quality of immunization ahead of the cost, because I feel like the middle body paragraphs seem to get lost, and the quality should be a very important point.
Do you intend to focus only on covid-19, or could you use other vaccines created in the past or potentially ones currently in the process of being made for your arguments?